Beautiful / redundant
This song was good, but I couldn't listen to it for a second time. It really got dragged out too much.
If you shortened it up a bit, my rating would be much higher. Another thing you could improve on is your variety of instruments. That goes hand in hand with what I said earlier, if you use the same drum beat in the back round the song is going to get a little boring.
With all that said, it's still a good song. It could just be a lot better with some modifications.
Keep it up :)
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