Seems really scattered
To me it doesn't seem like you put a lot of effort into it. Like it was thrown together hastily. The noises also seem to be very random.
It was better in the beginning and than around the 10 second mark things just went downhill. Work on the organization brotha.
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I did do it very hastily! But thank you for the review I appreciate it guys!
Ledgendary!
This is the most epic song on NG, seriously.
For some reason it gets me pumped just listening to it, like before I run a big race I'll play this on my ipod.
I would be ignorant to offer any changes to this masterpiece, I just wish you the best with your future work and hopefully it comes out as good as this one :)
Good Luck!
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Impressive.
Catchy beat and great variety.
Nothing could be better, this is great work.
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Good to hear, man, thanks! ;D
Great Work.
I love how it gradually evolves into the beat. With a new sound being introduced at various points over the timeline.
It could have been shorter, however. It became a bit redundant after about two minutes, in my opinion. If you want to keep this length, I think you should add some more variation in your instruments.
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Lastly, the loop is a little shaky. Work on perfecting the transition from end to beginning and this loop would be great.
Keep it up!
Beautiful.
One of the top classical loops I've heard on Newgrounds. The singing and guitar were both very peaceful.
Only problem is the looping. It's a noticable change from the end to the beginning. Try to polish that up, and than this would be a near-perfect loop.
Great work, and keep it up!
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Glad you liked it! Truth be told I don't quite hear what you mean :c. I know the player sometimes comes in too early/too late but to me it loops rather well... at least most the time anyways.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
Nice beat.
Not gonna lie, wasn't expecting much when I clicked on this song.
So I was surprised to find out you put some effort into this. Some nice variety and rhythm. Don't know what you meant when you said the end isn't happy level music. Sounds like the rest of the song.
Keep up the good work.
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Yeah, I expected that reaction with the name, haha. :P
I dunno, the end just doesn't really sound that happy to me.
Good beginning!
A great start to the first song of your album. Not much to say, since it's only 54 seconds or so. For the final version you should add some insane guitar solo. That's always my favorite part of a song :3
Great start, just continue the momentum into the rest of the song.
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Great song!
I love how it starts off one way and than it slowly gains momentum. Most of my favorite songs progress that way. Kudos.
While that was great, I still think it should have been shorter. For the amount of instruments used it stretched too long. Just my opinion, I'm sure most people love it as it is but I think it could be shorter.
Nonetheless, great work.
Your lucky this version is shorter than the orginal cos of the file limits on NG :P
Perfect!
Other than the length, this piece was perfect. Great use of instrumentation and piano. I understand this is only a demo, though. So as good as it is I'm sure the real one will be that much better :)
I'll keep an eye out.
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Impressive.
Honestly, the variation in instrumentation is awesome. The whole beat is very catchy, and hard to find flaws in. One of the better loops I've heard.
Only thing is, it doesn't loop very well. Try starting it out with that same beat that it ends on. Would be perfect for a puzzle-type flash.
Some hardcore shit, keep it coming.
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